Tuesday, May 1, 2012

A WALK TO REMEMBER

 It was a dark night with a deep cloudy sky,
 Da lovely drops of rain  flowing thereby,
 Da street lights gave a beautiful  shine to da water lying on da ways,
 Da lake near by was getting filled up with water increaing it's grace,
Holding hands while were walking in rain,
He held an umbrella to me make feel safe,
Walking with him in that rain was a wonderful phase,
Looking at da sky n singing songs together,
Splashing water with feet holding hands together,
Playing with ma wet hair n admiring da way i looked,
Gazing at me n saying..water droplets make you look even more gorgeous baby! <3
Da shine of street lights dat were falling on his face,
Making his deep eyes shine looking at me with an admirable craze,
Though rain was'nt a new thing for me,
Yet i felt getting dRenched in rain was something brand new for me,
walking miles n miles din't make me feel tired at all,
His warm touch n d romantic rain may b made me move on n on,
Dropping me home finally wen he closed da umbrella,
Hugging me tight n saying good night,
kissing me with a gentle touch ..
making me feel da grace of US,
dat walk was mere the longest one indeed,
loveable memory leaving us know that "yes IT's all about WE indeed "

4 comments:

  1. i want to say something,,,,,,actually a lot ...... but short of words.....
    i feel any word of praise won't be able to justifiably admire this creation......
    another beauty....
    :) :) :) :) :)

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    1. aaaaaaww..thanx a ton :) glad u liked it :)

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  2. aaaahhhhhhaaaaa.... well i guess shud say dat ... i missed ur blog frm past few days by not visiting (ofyc ofyc khelna padta hai yaar).... u hv updated it wid some of ur lyftym posts... worth reading again , again , again ........ and again,

    u knw wat Palak.......'In life u will realize that there is a purpose for everyone you meet.Some will test you, some will use you, some will love you and some will teach you. Most important are the ones that bring out the best in you, respect you and accept you for who you are. Those are the ones worth keeping around - keep them close to your heart'.....

    Keep Smiling.. Bless You.. Tc

    nd the picture wid dis post is outstanding.....Gud one.. :) :)

    @Sandy............

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    1. awww thnx fr missing ma wrk :) dats a gr8 compliment fr me..n ya even i ws wondering how cm dre r no posts by ur side..n no comments either..i understand bsy life gosh..being a human itslf is a job lol..n lovely lines...some stay,some go,ol dey leave r memories n teachings! :) tcr...

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