Monday, April 9, 2012

eVeN ThOuGh YoU ArE NoT HeRe!!!

eVeN ThoUgH YoU ArE NoT HeRe
                                           EvEn tHoUgH mA HeArT AcHeS....
                                           yEt i lOvE YoU....
                                           WiTh thE SAmE GrAcE....
                                           eVeN tHoUgH I vE CrIeD A MillioN TeArS..
                                           yEt i LOvE YoU WiThoUt ANy fEaRs..
                                           EvEn thOuGh YoU DoN't sAy mUcH...
                                           yEt i tRy aNaLySiNg WhAT U FeEl  As sUcH..
                                           eVeN ThOuGh yOu wEnT FaR FrOm Ma sIgHt...
                                            YeT I HavE Da fAiTh tHiNgS WiLl gO AlLrIgHT!!!
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  1. UnknownApril 9, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    wow, this one is simply awwwwwwwwwwwesomeeeeeeee yaar.... i loved it esp "eVeN ThOuGh yOu wEnT FaR FrOm Ma sIgHt...YeT I HavE Da fAiTh tHiNgS WiLl gO AlLrIgHT!!!".... Superbbbbbb..... dats wat i always talk abt i.e. "hv FAITH, keep PATIENCE and gv it sum TIME..."......... :)

    Keep Smiling... Bless You... Tc

    @Sandy...........

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    1. Palak DuaApril 10, 2012 at 4:39 AM

      glad dat u liked it :) ya faith da only thing can do nw :) btw u knw ds was jst a random one...like..n still u liked it :)

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    2. UnknownApril 10, 2012 at 9:34 PM

      heyiieee...... if it's a random nd dat too with such beautiful lines...wat wud happen in case u write wid pouring ur heart out(though u already do)....i guess ur blog shud be recommended for IndiBlogger contest.... :)

      Keep Smiling.... Bless You.. Tc

      @Sandy..........

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    3. Palak DuaApril 11, 2012 at 1:39 AM

      arey itna bhe well i dnt write..honestly..i jst write wt i feel..n nthn mch othr than that :)

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    4. UnknownApril 11, 2012 at 3:49 AM

      arey u do buddy
      nd dats more imp... i.e. writing ur true feelings nd as i always say "Words Scribbled frm Heart never Lies...."
      and hey thnx for sparing sum tym out frm ur bsy exam schedule.... Keep "Scribbling"......
      hw r ur studies/exam goin.... All the best.. :)

      Keep Smiling.. Bless You.. Tc

      @Sandy...........

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    5. Palak DuaApril 11, 2012 at 11:25 AM

      umm abi tak 1 xam went.. it went gd..thanx :):)tcr

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    6. UnknownApril 11, 2012 at 10:04 PM

      hmmm gr8.... chalo fir achche se xam do.. nd after d results r out dun 4get to throw a party... :) ..GoodLuck...

      Keep Smiling.. Bless You.. Tc

      @Sandy......

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  2. dhruv solankiApril 10, 2012 at 10:37 AM

    your poem are like toast......... dipped in love...........
    ....awful metaphor...i guess....no offense intended.....
    another beautiful diamond in the treasure of CASTLE OF WORDS ....loved it ..

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    1. Palak DuaApril 10, 2012 at 10:41 AM

      ohh dats a huge compliment indeed :) thanx alot :)

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    2. dhruv solankiApril 10, 2012 at 10:50 AM

      ur welcome

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    3. dhruv solankiApril 10, 2012 at 10:57 AM

      i would love to have a take of yours on my new poem

      http://dhruvanshforever.blogspot.in/2012/04/ode.html

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