May be that is why you cannot realize how much it's hurting,
Ma sadness seems to have no impact on your busy life,
Ma countless tears make no difference in your happening lifestyle,
The Smiles i have been faking each day to make you stay well have stayed unnoticed,
The Expectations i have been telling you whole time never made any difference,
Was i never anything for you boy?
Did i never made a difference in your life,
Was i just a mere option for you?
Was i never ever a priority for you?
You held me tight saying you 'll never let me down,
But today things are just fading away,
You promised we'll maintain the bond,
But promises seem to fade away,
Ma nights are sleepless,
Ma pillow remains wet,
Ma eyes remain swelled,
Ma hearst cries aloud as it made u stay inside,
Ohhhh,it's hurting,its hurting like hell,
But all i wonder,will you ever see my tears !!!
lovely !! <3
ReplyDeletethanku sweety :)
DeleteI like it..
ReplyDeletehey thanku so much!! good to see ur comment after such a long tym :)
Deletehmm.. bus thoda blogging ki jagah fb zyada hogaya.. ha ha..
ReplyDeletehehe lol..i understand..me 2 use fb quite mch specially wen free :D
DeleteThat was good!
ReplyDeleteIf he wants to see, he will. If he doesn't you will!
Maybe you'd get this, maybe you won't.
But it's still worth the wait :)
wait is the only option when you r truly loyal indeed :) thanx fr ur lovely comment :)
DeleteIf he cannot see, then he's not worth you :) With time, the pain heals. You gotta be strong :)
ReplyDeletei wish making the heart believe this was so easy :) thanx fr such an inspiring comment! glad :)
Deleteit's straight from the heart!! .... I hope things are fine now :)
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling and keep writing..
Its a wonderful piece of writing.. :)
well you are right it's straight from the heart! :) and hoping to make things fine soon :) thanx alot fr ur comment! keep visiting:)
Deleteevery time i read your post and think wowww.. this is best...you come up with a better one..... srsly... how do keep up coming with such amazing post one after the other.....
ReplyDeletebeautiful creation...simply superb.... :) :)
aawwww n every tym i read ur beautiful inspiring comments,m inspired mre n mre to write :) thanx a ton yar :) n as i told wteva ma heart says,i pen it down :)
DeletenIce..Write more :) Waiting to read ur posts..
ReplyDeletethanx a heap revathi :) will surely come up with more posts :) glad u liked it! keep visiting:)
Deletehmmm Palak.... u know wat.. der r things we need to let go... i know at times its nt an easy task.......bt anyhow its gotta be done....
ReplyDeletei knw hw u feel...
loved "But all i wonder,will you ever see my tears...".... u knw wat.. nobody cares... people juz move on after breaking some1's heart widout even giving a single thot....nd the one suffering has gt nothing left other than writing or rather pouring out his feelings on a scrap of paper(now a days blogs)... nd dis is hw gr8 writers r born......
nd yeah i can see this inside you thru ur blogs.... juz keep writing...
well done....
Keep Smiling... Bless You.. Tc...
@Sandy..........
u r a absolutely right in wteva u said...it's due to da hard sufferings, writers are born!! thanx a ton fr ur comment :) loved da lines really!
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