Saturday, June 14, 2014

Till the last breath..

Few scars never heal,
no matter how hard you try.
You move on,get busy,smile,talk...communicate to heaps of people
but then there is always an emptiness inside the heart..
The scars which make you  feel the pain of past...
past that once mattered to the most.
The life which was your dream once when comes to an end..a part of you dies with the shattering of those dreams.
You die within but life keeps on moving unfortunately,
Yes,people come and go but when soul dies...it takes a lot of courage to make it alive...
Not always you begin to dream again,
not always your scars heal,
few scars just stay...stay till the time you die...till the last breath......

14 comments:

  1. They stay but you move on... You deserve much better.

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  2. Good one !
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  3. beautiful line :) Keep up good work!

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    1. Thanks a ton :) keep visiting :)

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    2. Probably it would have been apt had u used body in place of soul... Body changes and ultimately becomes of no use...but yes, we gotta move on and hope for better things in life....keep blogging :)

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    3. scars on body might heal with time and medication but the death soul ...those scars...nup they never heal :(
      that is why I used the word soul instead of body :)
      keep visiting :) ur comments mean a lot :)

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  4. true, some scare are always fresh - they can never heal...nice work

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    1. yeah..some scars are quite deep..no matter how long it has been ..they don't heal ..
      thanks for dropping by :) means a lot :) take care ,keep visiting :)

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  5. These lines are Epic ones, "Not always you begin to dream again,
    not always your scars heal,
    few scars just stay...stay till the time you die...till the last breath....." You know according to me scars are good, it helps your realize who you are and how strong you are. It's those scars that make you a stronger person. As rightly said, some scars stay till you die. Beautifully worded...:)

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    1. true,very true...scars make you realize about your inner strength and also the lessons you learnt
      Thank you for your generous words,they seriously mean a lot :)
      Take care :)

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