I don't know from where this journey did start,
I don't know why I am in pain,
I don't know why this trauma did start,
I kept shattering each day more n more,
I kept asking myself how far do i still need to go,
I have no answers lying within,
I have so much of pain lying within.
I lost love,love that i considered to be a major part,
I am walking towards nowhere......a path leading to nowhere....
Very poignant indeed!
ReplyDeleteNice poem.
thanx a ton :) glad u liked it..keep visiting..means alot :)
DeleteAt a loose end....
ReplyDeleteBeautifully versed
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Deletebeautiful composition....
ReplyDeletethnku so vei much :) keep visiting :)
DeleteI can totally replicate the same feelings inside my heart after reading your poem.. and today I discovered that I am already following you.. :) I am indeed a careless blogger... :)
ReplyDeletehehehe :) its ok..i understand how busy life is at tyms :) thnx a ton fr being a part of ma blog..its so good 2 know dat u cud replicate same feeling inside ur heart :) comments of ppl like u..make it worth :) keep visiting :) tcr..
DeleteWell well well.... m very angry frm u... 2m bolti ho ki u dun feel lyk writing anymore..... bt here u r again wid 1 more amazing post.... yar agar aisa hota hai likhane ka man na karne pe to fir jab mankarne lagega to fir pata nahi kya karogi.... hehe ....
ReplyDeleteBht bht bht bht achcha likha tha ye post... it really tells wat goin inside u dese days .... m no one to judge nd comnt on it.... bt still yahi kahunga..... jo bhi hai...everything happens 4 a reason.... hai na palak.... juz hv sum patience nd faith.. rest leave upto ur destiny....
Keep smiling...god bless u... tc
@Sandy.....
hehhhe :) ap bhut zda wale intelligent ho mere buddy :) :) i wonder if i dnt find ny commnts of urs on ma posts..kya hoga mera :) if ma blog posts feel complete its cz of ur presence yar...n it feels gr8 wen u gv so good suggestions n support me lyk u knw me snce yrs :) gr8 to have u here :) god bless u heaps :) tcr..n thnx fr everyhthng...
Deletelovely words...nice lines!
ReplyDeletethank you so much :)
Deleteyou stole mah thought!!!
ReplyDeleteevery word sounds most appropriate foe the situation am in
don't worry everything will b all right soon :)
Deleten m glad that you could connect to my post so well :)